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Readers have evolved into bright individuals who do not tolerate errors, upsetting content, or poor English. This enlightened community will leave scathing reviews by the truckload for timid infractions. However, authors are humans, and humans make mistakes all the time. Do readers know this fact? They are a fickle bunch that demands perfection.
Wait a minute. Am I stating that an author must know everything and use this infinite knowledge base to create perfect works? Yep. But what about an honest mistake?
A good example is racial slurs. Sadistic people have been inventing them since humans started speaking, and we now have an extensive list that grows every day. An upstanding writer might not be aware of a recently created slur and offend readers. Did you know the word Apple is a slur? It is that easy. The damage is done once the eagle-eyed reader spots the problem, and the bad reviews will flow.
Should readers be more forgiving? No, because they know that writers have a trick up their sleeve. They have all the time in the world to edit their creations. Good writers always search for grammar, spelling, continuity, logic, plot, historical accuracy, offensive elements, structure, pacing, flow, character development, descriptions, layout, style, consistency, and content mistakes. A writer can even decide not to publish because their creation is not up to their standards. We also have tools like Grammarly, Microsoft Word, ProWritingAid, and ChatGPT. There is no excuse for an obvious mistake.
That is true, but an excellent writer can edit to their heart’s content but still miss a glaring mistake. As proof, I found one this morning. “I did this because of Nicholas’s strict instructions , which intended to keep me out of jail.” Did you see the extra space before the comma? Well, I did not for ten editing passes. Even Microsoft Word points this out with a big glaring red underline. Nope, I still missed it.
Is that tiny error that big of a deal? After all, if a writer perfectly transcribed the way we all talk, there would be loads of grammatically wacky junk that would not make sense in written form. True, but writers are held to a higher standard.
Here is an awful example that must never occur, “Bob said she was ready to be picked up.” That was an innocent he/she mistake. It was an honest error, and I admit it. So, we are good? Right?
Today, the topic of gender is more significant than ever. It might be the most discussed topic in popular media. The attention to this topic has resulted in new laws, massive public campaigns, mega shifts in entertainment, companies losing billions, and drastic societal changes.
The problem is that female readers and viewers know the topic’s importance well. So, when they read my timid sentences, they will think, “Did Bill just lump me in with a man? How rude!” And men are in the same camp. “Did Bill just call Bob a woman? What the heck? Jerk!” I can feel readers typing angry thoughts right now. And I do not blame them. Reading this glaring error would tick me off, and I would probably leave an angry comment.
What is going on in the reader’s mind? After all, readers are writers too. They send emails, text messages, and write documents. They are not perfect, and they know this fact. Here is my opinion. That is all fine until they pay for something. Just like a driver expects their car to work, a reader expects their book to be free from obvious errors. “Hey, my car will not start.” “World War II began September 1, 1989. That sentence did not contain an innocent mistake; it was a glaring error.
What are writers to do? “Edit until your hands bleed.” “Use every available resource.” “Try your best.” “Go with the flow.” “Ignore the bad reviews.” It seems like bad advice, but it is the only advice I have to offer.
You’re the best -Bill
March 12, 2025
Hey, book lovers, I published four. Please check them out:
Interviewing Immortality. A dramatic first-person psychological thriller that weaves a tale of intrigue, suspense, and self-confrontation.
Pushed to the Edge of Survival. A drama, romance, and science fiction story about two unlikely people surviving a shipwreck and living with the consequences.
Cable Ties. A slow-burn political thriller that reflects the realities of modern intelligence, law enforcement, department cooperation, and international politics.
Saving Immortality. Continuing in the first-person psychological thriller genre, James Kimble searches for his former captor to answer his life’s questions.
These books are available in softcover on Amazon and in eBook format everywhere.
